Revising: Big Mistakes and Big Lessons

I finally reached my goal for draft one of The Tower Project this month, with a little over 70,000 words written. It was an accomplishment that felt both bitter sweet, and immensely satisfying. With draft one in the bag, where does that leave me?

In short, starting from scratch.

Image of sketched skull on pink background: “Draft one complete” #TheTowerProjectWIP
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When the Greatest Barrier is Me

November has come to a close, and Nanowrimo has drawn to an end. My goal this year was around 12,000 words — a mere fraction of the 50,000 some of you brave writers committed to. If you succeeded, congratulations! If you fell a little short, don’t be disappointed. I’ll leave a tweet below from the official Nanowrimo account that perfectly captures my feelings:

For me, November had a bumpy start. I didn’t start writing until the month was already half over (oops) but when I got going, I wrote every night for 45 min-2 hours. I used writing sprints, roughly writing 800-1200 words per night. It ended up requiring quite a bit of discipline, there were multiple evenings when I just didn’t feel like showing up. Taking that time to work on my goals gave me a small sense of accomplishment which kept me coming back.

So, did I make it? Just about. I find myself about 200 words shy of my 70,000 goal for this draft of The Tower Project. This is the farthest I’ve come in the 10 years I’ve been writing.

But I’m having a hard time crossing the finish line.

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The Home Stretch

70,000 words is the goal for my first draft. It’s a carefully chosen word count, a minimum amount of words for my carefully chosen genre. The average number of words in my genre is somewhere around 100,000, so there’s room to expand in my second draft. Hopefully I gain words, and don’t just lose them. In the past, I’ve made it to about 30,000 words in a project before petering out, so trust me when I say that minimum goal is still ambitious.

Nanowrimo is National Novel Writing Month and, although I’ve participated in the past, I’ve never “won”. The goal for the month is to write 50,000, a feat which previously seemed impossible. I’ve only ever come “close” once, when I wrote 28,000 words.

I have a hard time staying motivated. I’m a planner, a plotter and inevitably, when my project veers away from my careful plot, I get overwhelmed and frustrated. A feeling that shortly leads to abandonment.

So you can imagine my feeling of excitement as I mosey into Nanowrimo with a tiny little goal of 12,000 words. That’s it. That’s all I have left before I reach my goal of 70,000 words, and it’s only taken three years to get here. Three years on the same project, with the same characters in the same world. It feels impossible to me that it’s taken so long, and it feels equally impossible that I’ve come this far. 12,000 words — I think that makes this my official home stretch.

All this to say, keep going! Don’t lose momentum and, if you do, don’t give up.

Drop some encouragement in the comments below! November might not be the month everyone manages to write a novel, but I move to make it National Cheer on a Writer Month! If you have a writer friend in your life, now’s the time to send them some love!

A collage of images representing characters in my current novel WIP, TTP

Writer’s Toolbox: Sprinting

Hello, yes, I am not a fan of exercise. There is, however, one form of sprinting I can get behind.

Start line for “100m sprint”

A writing sprint is a timed activity in which you write without distractions. Follow that up with a short break, then sprint again. Repeat for as long as you desire. Similar to the Pomodoro productivity technique, which breaks work into 25-minute segments separated by 5-minute rests using a timer, writing sprints can be customized to fit whatever time you have available.

I find Pomodoro works great when I’m on my own (you can use any timer app or install a Pomodoro extension on your browser), but sprinting with friends really kicks it up a notch. I’m a part of a sprinting group on Facebook, for example. One person posts when they’re about to begin the sprint with something like, “starting at (time)” so everyone can get in sync. People comment if they’re joining and, when the sprint ends, discuss how it went. The encouragement helps provide motivation and the company grants accountability.

Discord has been an excellent tool for connecting with other writers during the pandemic. My writing group has invited “Writer-bot” to our server which allows you to earn XP by telling it your word count each sprint. Gamification baby!

Sprinting is an essential part of my writing routine and is especially helpful if I’m struggling. Every-time I see someone try it for the first time, they’re astonished with the progress they’re able to make.

Have you tried sprinting?

If not, I’ll get you started…

… GO. You’ve got 10 minutes!

Writer’s Toolbox: Critique Groups

In my third year at university I took a writing critique class. We each submitted a chapter or short story on a rotating basis and were responsible for critiquing the weekly submissions. I have never learned as much — or been as productive — as I was with a bi-weekly deadline and the expectations of my peers looming over me. The feedback made me a better writer and gave me big-time motivation that rolled over week to week.

Giving and receiving critique might be nail-biting at first, but it’s a skill that’s worth learning!

After I graduated and found a desk job, my productivity fizzled. Almost ten years later, I randomly crossed paths via Facebook with a writing group setting up shop near my house. In the first couple of months participating I struggled to get a chapter done every month. I would often be writing furiously the night before the deadline (or still writing the day after the deadline had passed…). As time went on and I continued to write one chapter a month — shocker here — it got easier!  

To that end, I would encourage every writer to find a group of like minded folx who will help motivate them to write. There are a lot of options depending on your comfort level, from an individual critique partner to face-to-face groups of various sizes.

You’ve got options

  • Critique partner: I found my critique partner through a large discord server for writers. We’re interested in similar genres and have complimentary writing styles. I helped her revise a book jacket and we worked well together. When she put out a call asking for a critique partner, I jumped at the chance! This kind of connection is fantastic because we’ve built a lot of trust. I know she’ll enjoy and appreciate my writing, and still point out the weaknesses. I get a ton of encouragement from my critique partner and find her feedback very motivational. This is more of a developmental partnership, and the drawback is that one person can only provide a limited amount of perspective and expertise.
  • Online group: whether through a social app like Facebook or a forum like Discord, there are many places to find other writers! This kind of group is great for when you have questions, need to brainstorm or need to crowdsource some encouragement, but it’s not a critique platform. You generally won’t be able to develop the same level of personal relationships in a larger group, but it is a great place to meet people if you’re looking for beta readers or a critique partner!
  • Face-to-face group: This is the option I want you to consider! The benefits cannot be understated. You get the opinions, perspectives and expertise of multiple writers at once, the encouragement of people on the same journey as you, and the benefits of a face-to-face connection. Why does it matter that it’s face to face? It is so so easy to mire yourself in your own feelings when receiving feedback online. If there isn’t trust already built, it can be hard to take that feedback to heart without being offended. This is a skill. It’s a muscle you build like any muscle, by tearing it and then letting it heal (with pain, lots of pain). Having feedback delivered in person can make you more receptive to it. Overtime, you’ll build trust with your group and begin to see the feedback make a difference in the reactions you’re getting. That’s a great feeling.

If you’re in Alberta you can check out the list of writers critique groups on the Writers Guild of Alberta site, that’s where I found the Discord server for Yeg Writes. Though I don’t meet in person with that group, it’s a fantastic community of writers, readers and editors cheering each other on. If you live elsewhere, research your local writers guild or ask a local bookstore if they know of any active writers groups. There’s a wealth of active Discord servers to check out as well.

Questions? I’m currently working on a post with tips and best practices for giving and receiving critique! Help me out by asking in the comments below. 👇